Sunday, October 11, 2009

Poetry Writing vs. Poetry Analysis

Writing poetry is much more difficult that writing about a poem as it requires more attention to detail. With fewer words, there is less room for error or confusion in the message that one is trying to convey. In writing poetry the last few weeks, I have found that even the slightest alteration in wording or sentence structure can change the meaning of the poem. Furthermore, the way in which I phrase words can mean entirely different things for multiple readers. When writing an essay about a poem, however, one is much more able to interpret the meaning of the poem for oneself. In reading poetry I have always found that it is important to take yourself as a reader outside of the interpretation of the poem. I find that I must look for the original meaning that the poet intended and as a result must dig deeper in the word choices and phrasing that author used. The exercises of writing one’s own poetry certainly reinforced this belief because if a reader was to interpret my work for an academic piece I would want my original intention to be obvious while also flowing well. I certainly found a new appreciation for the works of the great poets because I realized that creating an original, meaningful and succinct poem to be difficult. Not only because I had difficulty controlling my flow of ideas into one poem but also because there is such a vast number of topic to choose from. Even once I was able to find a topic to my liking, keeping the ideas to a minimum proved difficult. Poetry is an art that few can master which was quite evident in these exercises.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Rachel,

    I completely agree with your analysis between the differences of the analyization of poetry and the actual writing of poetry itself. We have to choose our words very carefully when writing poetry because we have very few words to deal with and ultimately much more room for error and misunderstanding.

    But really, I personally feel that there is more pressure on us while writing a poem, basically because we just don't want to sound stupid. I mean, we're dealing in the realm of feelings and emotions here, which is very sensitive territory. On one hand we don't want to sound mechanical and cold in our musings, but on the other hand we don't want to sound like a hallmark card. And ultimately, I think we don't want to get laughed or scoffed at. This last point probably being the most poignant when we are trying to get our students to open up when we ourselves are teachers.

    Maybe the answer is that we all just need to write more poetry. Practice makes perfect, I guess. Or maybe we just need to open up to each other more as a society? You know, express our feelings more, then perhaps we'd be more willing to put those words poetically down on a sheet of paper for all to read.

    Anyway, just a few thoughts. I know I went off on a bit of a tangent. Regardless, best of luck to you in all of your writings, whether it be formal or creative.

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  2. Dear Rachel,


    I thought your post incorporated what most of us were probably thinking. Certainly what I was thinking. The way creating a poem has to be so carefully done is very difficult. I know for me I eventually said “screw it” I’ll write it however I want and if it sucks it sucks. If the meaning doesn’t end up very powerful or the real meaning gets lost in translation somewhere along the way, oh well, that will probably happen anyway no matter how hard I try.
    I think the best advice I got about writing a poem once was to keep it in a natural voice. Well, my natural voice probably doesn’t sound very poetic so what do I do then? (I guess I stick to essays.) Maybe we shouldn’t write poetry for any other reason or for anyone else other than ourselves. And if it’s not very good, oh well, most people’s poetry isn’t very good and what’s wrong with fitting in.

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